Module 10 · Mock Exam 3 & Final CPE Simulation · Lesson 40
Register, cohesion, and the day itself
Warm-up · Section 1
4 minDraft your ONE-LINE walking-in sentence — the sentence you'll say to yourself the morning of the real exam. Keep it under 15 words. Use course language.
In the last 24 hours before the exam, candidates either POLISH or PANIC. What's ONE polish move you'll make and ONE panic move you'll REFUSE?
Between Reading and Writing, between Writing and Listening — you have 15 minutes. What will you do in those minutes? Be specific.
Grammar focus · Section 2
8 minQuick rule
Cohesion lifts Communicative Achievement by making the writer's argument visibly tracked. Two techniques close the last band gap: (1) GIVEN-NEW CHAIN — every new sentence opens with given (mentioned) information and closes with new (target) information; (2) RECYCLED NOUNS — replace generic 'this/that/it' with the specific noun ('this approach', 'this assumption', 'this trade-off'). Together they make a paragraph feel inevitable rather than assembled.
Examples
WITHOUT cohesion: 'Public consultation helps. But it costs money. There are also delays. Most cities still use it.'
WITH given-new chain: 'Public consultation reliably improves outcomes. Those outcomes, however, come at a measurable cost — in money and in time. The cost-benefit balance is the question most cities must now answer.'
RECYCLED NOUN (replace 'this'): 'This [→ THIS TRADE-OFF] is what most planning departments struggle to articulate.'
Density target: ONE given-new chain per paragraph + at least TWO recycled-noun substitutions per essay.
Quick check
Question 1.Which paragraph has a given-new chain?
Question 2.Best recycled-noun replacement for 'This is hard to articulate':
Question 3.Why do given-new chains lift Communicative Achievement specifically?
Question 4.Density target per essay:
Question 5.Time cost in the 7-minute edit window:
Vocabulary · Section 3
6 minregister cell
the precise combination of formality + familiarity + purpose required by a genre
e.g. Proposal-to-manager register cell: semi-formal, low-familiarity, persuasive.
Use it now
Name the register cell for ONE of your homework drafts.
↻ Recycled in reading
given-new chain
the cohesion technique where each sentence opens with given info and closes with new
e.g. The given-new chain makes the paragraph read as an argument, not a list.
Use it now
Convert one of your Mock-3 paragraphs into a given-new chain.
↻ Recycled in writing
recycled noun
the specific noun that replaces generic 'this/that/it' to name what the thread is about
e.g. Recycled nouns ('this trade-off', 'this assumption') name what the thread is about — major Communicative Achievement marker.
Use it now
Replace TWO 'this/that' in your last draft with recycled nouns.
↻ Recycled in writing
the walking-in sentence
the one-line sentence you say to yourself the morning of the exam
e.g. My walking-in sentence is 'Anchor and commit — the work is done'.
Use it now
Draft yours now.
↻ Recycled in conversation
between-paper reset
the 15-minute protocol between papers — water, breath, one line, do not review
e.g. Between-paper reset: water, three slow breaths, my walking-in sentence, hands on the desk. NOT reviewing answers.
Use it now
Write your reset protocol in 4 lines.
↻ Recycled in exam-skills
the last 60 seconds
the script for the final minute of any paper — commit unmarked, check name, breath
e.g. Last 60 seconds: commit any unmarked answer, check name and number, one slow breath, hands off the desk.
Use it now
Write your last-60-seconds script.
↻ Recycled in exam-skills
Pair / group discussion
Complete each stem about yourself
Rank & justify
Rank by which is hardest to maintain under exam stake-perception:
Quick write (60 seconds)
Write your own 30-word personal Writing polish rule starting 'When I have 7 minutes to edit, I…' — use today's terms.
Pronunciation · Section 4
3 minThe morning of the real exam, read your one-page protocol AND your walking-in sentence aloud for 60 seconds at an even tempo. Not as recitation — as ANCHORING. The voice carries the script into procedural memory the morning brain can deploy under stakes. Drill the tempo NOW so it deploys cleanly.
Reading · Section 5
8 minCambridge-style marker annotation · P1 essay · 250 words
Notice how the annotations highlight register-marker words (formal vocabulary, calibrated modals), given-new chains (each sentence opens with given info and closes with new), recycled nouns (specific replacements for 'this/that'), and the cleft closer that lands the essay.
Annotations show register consistency, given-new chains, recycled nouns, cleft closer · Exemplar
PROMPT: 'In rebuilding public spaces, is initial public reaction a useful guide for designers?'
Few would dispute [REGISTER: formal opener] that the rebuilding of public spaces is among the most contested civic projects of the present decade. The Marshall Square redesign — completed first, criticised loudest, praised three years on — has become the most-cited European case in planning curricula. THIS PATTERN [RECYCLED NOUN] of initial resistance followed by gradual acceptance is now widely documented; THE PATTERN'S [GIVEN-NEW CHAIN: 'pattern' carries forward] practical implications, however, remain contested.
On the balance of the cases reviewed [CALIBRATION], initial public reaction is a poor guide to long-term satisfaction. The reason, on the evidence, is structural: first use is dominated by novelty, second use by adaptation, third use by genuine response. THIS LAG [RECYCLED NOUN] — roughly eighteen months across comparable European programmes — is precisely the window in which the public moves from reaction to use, and from use to evaluation.
I'd push back [REGISTER: hedged stance], however, on the assumption that all initial reaction is therefore noise. Roughly one in five cases involves substantive criticism that the lag period exists to address. THIS MINORITY [RECYCLED NOUN] is where targeted design adjustment matters most.
It is the framing of consultation, not the act of consultation itself, that needs revisiting [CLEFT CLOSER]. Designers should consult at use three, not use zero — and weight the substantive minority over the novelty majority. Such a shift would not slow redesign; it would, on the balance of the evidence, accelerate the moment at which redesign begins to repay its costs.
Question 1.The opener 'Few would dispute that…' is which kind of marker?
Question 2.'THIS PATTERN' instead of 'this' — what's the cohesion move?
Question 3.Which sentence is the CLEFT CLOSER?
Question 4.The ASSERTION → CONCESSION+COUNTER move appears in which paragraph?
Question 5.The given-new chain in paragraph 1 is built around which word?
Listening · Section 6
8 minNotes
Listening audio
Tap play to listen. Scrub the bar or use ± 5 s to jump.
Candidate 1 (Italian, m, Band 5):My morning was deliberately uneventful. I woke at the normal time, ate the normal breakfast, walked to the centre. The protocol was: read the one-page sheet on the train — five named fixes, three marker phrases, walking-in sentence — and then put it away. At the centre, I didn't talk to the other candidates. Sat alone, water, one slow breath, my walking-in sentence — which was 'on the balance of three mocks, I commit at 20 seconds'. The phrase carried me through the first ten minutes of Reading, after which the work itself took over.
Candidate 2 (Spanish, f, Band 5):On the balance of how my mocks went, I knew my biggest risk was the cascading freeze in Listening. So my morning was specifically calibrated for that — I drilled the L33 freeze rule once, in my head, in the queue. 'Pencil guess, listen for the next item.' That was my anchor phrase. Between Reading and Listening, I had fifteen minutes — water, three breaths, the freeze-rule phrase three times, hands flat on the desk. Did the freeze happen? Yes — twice. Did it cascade? No. The phrase deployed and I lost one mark instead of four.
Candidate 3 (Scottish, m, Band 5):What I'd push back on is the temptation to do MORE on the morning of. My protocol was the smallest one in our study group. Walking-in sentence: 'Anchor and commit — the work is done.' I read it three times on the train, said it once at the door, and then went into the exam. Between papers, I literally did nothing except water and three breaths — I refused to review answers because reviewing inflates risk-perception. After all four papers, my friends had reviewed twice as much and felt half as confident. The discipline of doing nothing between papers is the under-talked-about skill.
Question 1.Candidate 1's walking-in sentence was:
Question 2.Candidate 2 specifically calibrated her morning for which risk?
Question 3.Candidate 3's central claim about between-papers behaviour:
Question 4.What did all three candidates have in common?
Question 5.Candidate 3's walking-in sentence was:
Visual stimulus · Section 7
3 minMemorise the register cell for each genre. The wrong opener or closer for the wrong genre is a Communicative Achievement penalty that no amount of grammar polish fixes.
Notes
Discuss in pairs
Which genre is YOUR least-confident register? Circle and drill this week.
Exam skills · Section 8
3 minStrategy
Example
EXAM-DAY SCRIPT — exemplar. MORNING (Wed 11 June) · 07:00 wake (normal time). · 07:15 breakfast — same as a normal day. NOT a special breakfast. · 08:00 leave for centre — arrive 09:00 (exam at 09:30). · On the bus: read the one-page protocol once. Put away. · At the door: walking-in sentence aloud — 'Anchor and commit — the work is done.' · At the desk: water · one slow breath · hands flat · begin. BETWEEN R&UoE and READING (15 min) · Water · three slow breaths · walking-in sentence once silently · hands flat · eyes down · do NOT review answers · do NOT talk. BETWEEN READING and LISTENING (15 min) · Same protocol + ONE extra: silently drill the freeze-rule phrase ('pencil guess, listen for the next') three times. BETWEEN LISTENING and WRITING (15 min) · Same protocol + silently rehearse the cleft closer for the planned essay. LAST 60 SECONDS of every paper · Commit any unmarked answer (pencil guess if needed). · Check name AND candidate number. · One slow breath. · Hands off the desk. · Wait for invigilator. END OF EXAM · Walk out. Do not debrief with other candidates. Note one held-up moment, one lesson for any future exam. Signed & dated.
Practice · Section 9
7 minQuestion 1.R&UoE P4 · KEYWORD: BALANCE · 'Considering everything, the evidence supports the proposal.' → 'On the ____ ____ ____ , the evidence supports the proposal.'
Question 2.R&UoE P4 · KEYWORD: SUCH · 'A shift like this would accelerate redesign.' → 'A shift ____ ____ ____ would accelerate redesign.'
Question 3.R&UoE P4 · KEYWORD: WHAT · 'The framing is what needs revisiting, not the act.' → '____ ____ ____ revisiting is the framing, not the act.'
Question 4.R&UoE P4 · KEYWORD: FAR · 'The new approach is much better than the old.' → 'The new approach is ____ ____ ____ the old.'
Writing · Section 10
4 minYour task
POLISH ONE PARAGRAPH OF YOUR OWN (4 min). Take one paragraph from your Mock-3 Writing draft. Visible moves: (1) opener register-checked, (2) one given-new chain installed, (3) at least one recycled noun replacing 'this/that', (4) closer line landed with a cleft OR a calibrated claim. Submit ORIGINAL and POLISHED.
Before you submit
POLISH — sample. ORIGINAL (Band-3): 'Consultation is good. It helps a lot but it takes time. People need to wait. This is a problem. We should still do it.' POLISHED (Band-5): 'Public consultation reliably improves outcomes [REGISTER: calibrated opener]. Those outcomes [GIVEN-NEW: 'outcomes' carries], however, come at a measurable cost — eighteen months on average across comparable European programmes. THIS COST-BENEFIT BALANCE [RECYCLED NOUN replacing 'This'] is where most planning departments hesitate. It is the lag, not the cost itself, that deserves the harder look [CLEFT CLOSER].'
Speaking · Section 11
6 minSpeaking (4 min) — read your walking-in sentence aloud and defend it. Partner challenges: 'why THAT sentence?' / 'isn't 'anchor and commit' just vague self-talk?' / 'how is this different from a positive affirmation?'. Defend using L37 (exam-day script) + L38 (protocol) + today's cohesion-and-register language.
Partner rates the walking-in sentence and its defence.
Is the sentence SHORT, COURSE-LANGUAGE, PROCEDURAL and PERSONAL?
All four — short, course language, procedural, personal
Walk into the exam with it. This is what we built.
Short and course language, but generic
Add a personalisation — one mock-evidence detail makes it stick under stakes.
Personal but too long
Cut to under 15 words. The sentence must deploy in one breath.
Aspirational rather than procedural
Convert from 'I will…' to a procedural verb ('anchor', 'commit', 'land').
Useful phrases
Optional · Teacher-led
If time allows. ~12 min total
Homework · Section 12
Take-homeFinal polish pass on ONE of your Mock-3 Writing tasks (essay OR proposal OR report OR review OR email). Apply: register-cell check, given-new chain per paragraph, at least three recycled-noun substitutions, cleft OR calibrated closer. Submit ORIGINAL and POLISHED side by side.
Finalise your exam-day script. Sign and date. Read aloud once per day for the next 5 days. Pin alongside the one-page protocol. Bring both on exam day in a single envelope.
Record yourself reading your walking-in sentence aloud at the L40 morning-of tempo (even, slightly slow, falling intonation on the final syllable). Listen back: does it sound like an instruction to yourself, or a wish? Re-record until it sounds like an instruction.
Build a personal register-cell card for ALL five Writing genres — one card per genre, opener and closer pair memorised verbatim. Pin to desk for last-week drilling.
Recap · Section 13
Wrap-up